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Thursday, 10 September 2020

if I was in the dawn raid

 I was asleep my cat was next to me until i heard the door swing open I jolted out of bed and saw a police with a battin yelling at my dad I was so angry. I ran to the kitchen grabbed a knife and a frying pan. i crept behind the  police and wacked him in the spine.I kept waking him until I  heard a meow. I ran to my room and saw a dog growling at my cat i tackled the dog and threw him out of my room a police grabbed me and threw me in a paddy wagon. to be continued... 

1 comment:

  1. it was cool but it was short and i am wondering why she wanted more

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