Hi Talia-Ruby Thank you for sharing your work this week. I like how you included action words like sprinkle and spread into your recipe. Next time you can add an ingredients list at the start and a title. Keep up the great work, Miss Hudson
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Hi Talia-Ruby
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work this week. I like how you included action words like sprinkle and spread into your recipe. Next time you can add an ingredients list at the start and a title.
Keep up the great work,
Miss Hudson