Kia ora. I am Lance from St Mary’s School. I really liked the story and all the describing words you used. I learnt that matariki was saved from the other stars. Maybe you could make it look better and add some colours. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Lance from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story and all the describing words you used.
I learnt that matariki was saved from the other stars.
Maybe you could make it look better and add some colours.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Lance